Night sky-Poem

Hey readers!! How are you all doing? Guess what I wrote another poem..❤❤ I was in a silence and quiet mood and just wanted to write a poem. Here it is- Do tell me if you liked it or not and tell me your favorite line if you have.😊

Impenetrably dark and lonely nights

Yet you see some little light

Shining like glitter the stars and moon

Children of the villages sing some tunes

You can hear the sound of leaves rustling

From far away paths near the trees hustling

You can stargaze and experience the joys

and again enjoy the happiness which was destroyed

Now It’s just me and you

Under the stars and the moon

Once again you hold my hand

And remind me the past and the present we had

Hope I see this night sky again

With drizzle of droplets before it rains

A perfect view i’ll experience soon

A perfect view with me and you

So how was it? Well a few days later Ill post a blog review and make a survey. Make sure to do it as I have been wanting to improve my blog more!🙂

Thankyou all for the support

Later…. oh and I forgot “Happy Reading”😉

Published by nushhe

Hi, I am a 12 year old blogger with creative ideas and love reading books and writing. I have read more then 2000 books and love playing keyboard

44 thoughts on “Night sky-Poem

  1. A beautiful poem full of positivity. Light in dark night, holding hands, star gazing, children singing, sound of leaves etc.
    Though I feel, just my personal view, there is a blip.
    I believe ‘happiness’ cannot be destroyed’, it may get overshadowed, but remains there for us to retrieve!
    Seems you used the word ‘destroyed’ to rhyme with ‘joys’!
    Suppose we change the lines to :
    You can hear the sound of leaves rustling
    From far away paths near the trees hustling
    You can stargaze and rekindle joyful thoughts 
    and again enjoy the happiness which we forgot.

    I love the first two lines so much…they hook you into positivity!
    “Impenetrably dark and lonely nights
    Yet you see some little light”

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thankyou thankyou soo much! 😀😊 M really glad u liked this poem and the 2 lines. Oh ok.. next time I’ll make sure 👌🏻 Bcoz for me 12 year old i sometimes believe happiness is destroyed but now I guess it’s just overshadowed 😊

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  2. Awww!!! Beautifully written 😍😍 The whole poem is lovely but these are my fav lines
    “Now It’s just me and you
    Under the stars and the moon
    Once again you hold my hand
    And remind me the past and the present we had”
    It’s just so cute and romantic!!! I loved it ❤💕❤💕

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