Hey my friends and lovely bloggers, how are you doing😊❤️ I wrote a poem which is inspired by a poem I had read in school and it inspired me to write nostalgic. This poem is nostalgic and it’s my first time writing it, hope you’ll like it the way I loved writing it.🥰
The day I met you was not ordinary as it seems
Entangled in all your feelings u had for me
When all others couldn’t see how much u felt
I alone always believed u’re the one I dreamt
Believed that you are the one, your love seemed true
Waited for that day to come when u confess
Followed your loving paths and wanted to pursue
Cause only I knew the love you possessed
When we got to know how we both felt
My first and best moment of my life
Your sweet love you’s would make my heart melt
But later I realised this ain’t right
None of this was suppose to happen before
Now when it happened, I cant let to seem it go
I watched you as you left from the door
That feeling became out of control as it grows
Ur sweet talks made my world
It was a fantasy u had spun
It was like sunflowers which has blossomed from buds
But now every tear drop on flower creates blood
Ur poems treated me as a queen
Ur affection and care touched me
But when none of this existed
They marked as scar and became misted
I thought you were only mine
Yes, you had promised me
Now that I know they were lies
You became dead for me
Your flowers of love became black
Every sweet memory of ours, cracked
Now when you miss me, want me in life
I seem to say, “no thank you, I am alright”
Hope you enjoyed the poem!😊🥰 Anyways I had a crazy idea… I am planning to start writing songs. Do tell if I should?😊 Anyways hope you enjoyed this post. I know I should write more often but things seem to be busy for me somedays.❤️ and—
I wish all my readers a blissful colourful diwali, spend time with your family and loved ones. May you shower with blessings and happiness. Cheers. 😘😘
You should definitely give song-writing a go! Which instrument do you play?
beautiful poem🤩🥺and relatable! happy diwali💖
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thanks a lot glad u loved it😊❤️ I play the piano 😉 and same to u!!
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😶seriously?? piano? me too!! but i don’t have one of my own🥺😂😂 another same pinch
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yes! I have my keyboard. 😊 so I play that
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Wow, this was heart wrenching!!
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thanks a lot Nehal glad u loved it😊😘
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Yes! You should try song-writing! This was a beautiful poem.
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thanks a lot Naomi glad u liked it. yes sure will try😊🙂
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This is SO beautifully penned!! 😍❤ AH YES YES! you should definitely try song-writing! Can’t wait to read them already 😁
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Thanks a lot Diya! m soo glad u loved it. surely will try😊
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Happy Diwali
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Same to you😊
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😊😊
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Beautiful poem Nushhe!
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thanks a lot Ariela! glad u liked it😊
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That was so beautiful!! Loved it anushka!!
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thank you soo much, have a nice day😊
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Haa..that’s awesome Anushka..
Emotions played so beautifully…🎶✍🏻🙂👍🏻
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Thanks a lot Athira, glad u liked it😊
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My pleasure Anushka…
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This is beautiful Shh!!! And yes, you should definitely write songs!!
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Thanks a lot Swifty! ❤️ sure will definitely try
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lovely poem!! your writing is amazing🥰🥰💕
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Thankyou soo much, glad u loved it😊
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Awesome Anushka! I love this poem🤗🌹🌹
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Thanks a lot saparza, glad u liked it😊
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This was very beautiful, Anu! Hope you have been well. Stay blessed ❤️💐🌹🤗
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Thanks a lot Diana, glad u liked it. Yes I am well, how abt yourself?😊
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love the poem! how are you doing?
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hey Addie, thanks a lot😊💛 m good how are you?
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you’re welcome! i’m doing pretty good:)
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Need I even say that this was absolutely MAGNIFICENT??? ❤
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Thanks a lot❤️❤️ it means a lot to me, glad you loved it😊
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Beautiful Nushhe💕
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Thanks a lot cindy! glad u loved it😊
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welcome!💖
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Wowww
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thanks a lot, glad u liked it😊
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